Life of a(n) ______
The feeling that can not be heard, but could be seen
by face expression or tears
which always tells the truth like a truth teller.
But could not say anything or not able to say anything,
to tell the feeling of pain
or even happiness
is like a life of a(n) ________
Something that could be the hardest thing to not do is
not being able to share their happiness or pain
to others to be comforted.
I honestly am kind of confused of what this poem is about, because the first line says that it's a feeling that can be seen by facial expressions, but then later says that it can tell feelings of pain, and happiness. My best guess is your face; because it tells the feelings of different kinds of emotions. Although the last three line differs from my opinion, that is my strongest guess.
ReplyDeleteI also liked your description of the subject, but if anything, it would be a bit better if you could clarify it a bit more!!
Hi, I like your poem because u used the five sences so it made me visualize what was happening.
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