They come in all sizes and shapes
Many colours like rainbows
Float higher than the clouds
Have all the freedom in the world
Although some are tied down
give all kids and adults happiness
And at the end of their life they go with a loud pop
Hey, I really liked your poem! I liked the onomatopoeia you used at the end, but I think you might be missing a period at the end of your poem. Is it a balloon?
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ReplyDeleteYour poem is great! I really like how you described it, but your poem needs to be 10 lines long. I agree with Laura, my guess is also a balloon.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described your subject with different digital literacy, especially the last two lines. The only one thing I would say is to many give a little more depth at the ending, just to clarify it a bit more, and to use up all the 10 lines. Otherwise, this is a really creative poem!
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DeleteHi, I really liked ur poem it was very creative although it was only 8 lines. Is it a balloon?
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